Love is…doing what is right
once provoked to do wrong,
knowing the reasoning reward
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is… just being together
without words thrown into play
‘n in silence, knowing all’s okay
And that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…the calm after the storm
when the stakes are their highest
and peace rules over vindication
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…found in the simplicity
of a routine trip to the store shared
or the phone call about nothing at all
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…a product of deep roots.
Only time, conjoined with visits to the
bank of emotional deposits, can birth it
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…more than words spoken.
It’s their full depth of meaning
joined with the merit in expressing
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…growing older together
‘n watching youth’s splendor fade;
remembering, yet embracing change
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…the coming together
after the longest day spent apart;
content within each other’s arms
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love is…sharing a tragic loss,
and understanding the anguish
on the same level of ownership
and that feeling flooding you
when you’ve done the doing.
Love goes…beyond the rapture;
when sure it could never get better,
the morrow soars it to greater heights
and that feeling engolfing you
when all the doing has been done.
J. DeBellis 10/2/09
*sigh* utterly wonderful! Great work! Now, let me ask - was this in any way inspired by your thoughts of "Romeo and Juliet"? I love the way this poem works down into the last phrase, detailing love's expression, endurance, shared experience, a moving play, and then, at last - the finality of it. Poorly worded on my part, but I'm tired ...
ReplyDeleteYour poetry really is lovely, and you should be proud of it while you continue to move up, up, up! I can't wait until monday and hear what the group has written!